Cool intro, although at times, the melody seems a bit out of time.

The breakdown is cool also, nice pads.

Man that build up is intense, I rate that. The melody is okay. Its nice and different from what I'm use to hearing.

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Comments as I listen:

Good kick, clap is a little much though IMO.

Don't like the sound of the layer of the bassline that much, at least not the way it sounds by itself. Sounds okay when drowned in the mix though.

Like the effects. Percussions could be a lot more developped though IMO.

I like the hook, but I think the chord progression of the bassline could be a little more developped.

Nice pads, though just a tad artificial sounding. Maybe throw some noise in with it?

Don't really like the sound of the main lead, sounds like it needs backup with another lead sound.

Mad props for originality.

Don't like that snare roll all that much, but that's a matter of personal taste.

Somewhat disappointing climax, the track is lacking some energy after the buildup. Adding some white noise and more percussions will help this, as well as making a lead that's more "phat" sounding.


Overall it's pretty good. I think the synth sounds could use some serious beefing up, and if you did so this would be a really dope track.

thanks for your advise

ill try to do it next time ^^

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It's an ok track, but the melody doesn't do it for me. I like the pads in the breaks though, they're really nice!

Kick drum is lovely, nice and firm

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hmm, i actually like this, can't say that there is anything wrong with it, except the snare roll before the climax.

very orignal, and the coolest thing about this, you made a good track with the synths you used..amazing!

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