hey everyone!

i'm not sure if i should post this since the avarage production level on this forum is extremely high these days (just listen to tracks by bren, mart, nik, endre, mk-s, wim, the other john, luke and all those other i forgot..). makes my crap sounds even worse

but i'm still gonna post a sample of something i started a while ago. i hope there is anyone who wants to comment it please

download here right click save target as.

thnx in advance

john

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Originally posted by John i'm not sure if i should post this since the avarage production level on this forum is extremely high these days (just listen to tracks by bren, mart, nik, endre, mk-s, wim, the other john, luke and all those other i forgot..). makes my crap sounds even worse

Don't worry John, there's always me at the other end of the scale.

Downloaded. Will listen when I get home.

Have you sent me this already?

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Originally posted by Fundamental Don't worry John, there's always me at the other end of the scale. Downloaded. Will listen when I get home. Have you sent me this already?

hehe youre first track sounds hella lot better then most of what i have made
and yes, this is what i have sent you.

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shall i finish this or not? ...

YES

Change the clap tho

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Originally posted by John and yes, this is what i have sent you.

In that case (and as I said before) - GET IT DONE!!

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Of course you should finish it. I'm not sure that the chords flow quite as well as they could though, so maybe a little further experimentation with the notes would be worthwhile. But if you're perfectly happy with it already, it's fine as it is.

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Hi there!

The fact that this forums is filled with great producers doesn't mean that some amature guys shouldn't post here, imo the fact that this forums hold in it so much knowledge should only encourage you to post here more to get feedback and by so learn stuff and get better.


About your tune, i liked it alot , doesnt sound that avarege to me...
The bass sounds great, so is the melody. the whole thing sounds really chilled which is cool

I say finish it...
You have done a great job so far, keep it up!

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hye, that's not so bad like you think!

but you've to work on the lead-synth.. try to compress it more and use an exciter because it doesn't sound so clear how i like it

the accords are also nice but nothing special.. try to bring up an unregular change in your melody-flow. and also play more notes just before the end where the loop starts again. something like a melody walks upstairs.. (i hope you understand what i mean )

so long
cYrus

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shall i finish this or not?

y not?

never put urself down, it cant be half as bad as my productions.

downloading now, comment later.

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Originally posted by DJ-Kreing^^ Hi there! The fact that this forums is filled with great producers doesn't mean that some amature guys shouldn't post here, imo the fact that this forums hold in it so much knowledge should only encourage you to post here more to get feedback and by so learn stuff and get better. About your tune, i liked it alot , doesnt sound that avarege to me... The bass sounds great, so is the melody. the whole thing sounds really chilled which is cool I say finish it... You have done a great job so far, keep it up!

what he said ...exactly

+ I belive u need bring the string forword abit . coz it sounds diserted in the background... or perhaps add some more sub strigs 2 the one u have now

I hate when ppl dont know what they worth !!!!

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thnx guys! i hope i find some time to finish it with all your critics in mind, thnx a lot

john

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