hi

i am not sure how long you are producing..

first some technical issues..

the baseline is good! but i think the sound it self needs to be toughen up for more drive..the kick sample is not hard enough..also the whole balance of the mix is not right..give the track more panning maybe, and a better frequencie spread for a cleaner sound, coz i think its a bit chaotic.

Further to the track

very fucking nice ideas!! and boy the melody owns IMO the synths are very good, with some tweaking and Eqing this could work out very well!.

the break i liked alot very calm and nice pads on the background

the leads have a good synth, also add some extra percussion..

i think if you hand over the midi to some good producers mite come out a good remix out of this, i would like to give it an attempt though when i have the time, i just like this melody alot for some reason

check pm btw my email there if i could have the midi

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

Nice chilled start, bass is wicked!!! Wasn't expecting that at all, hi-hats sound gud coming in (do sound a bit distorted though), don't like that clave (think its a clave)

Got the synth comin in now, sounds kinda obtrusive, in a good way, trying to get at ya.

Chilldowns gud and like the melody coming in, in fact I agree with Massive, that melody is quite nice, quite quite nice.

Could take it a lot further.

Overall, great track. If you fancy letting me having a pop at a hard mix of this, PM me.

Cheers

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Technical issues aside, this is a sound track. Ideas are excellent and the melody is pretty decent too! I think Massive has covered most of the points so I wont re-iterate.

thanx for the feedback guys, keep em comming i appreciate it

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good job m8 ...

u have impruved alot since the last work u posted

as always u have good ideas ! and innovative sounds...

every thing possible was said... so kip up the good work

cheers

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wow.. this is so good i think i just might keep it on my hd... nice work.. this is the first song ive heard ive urs so cant really compare it to any earlier stuff of urs.. but.. nice work.. looking forward to hearing more.

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