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acell
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Registered: Jul 2002
Location: Melbourne
my first trance track.. can i get some feedback?

Hello all!!

Welp. Usualy i write hard trance but i was in a trancy mood so i remixed one of my hard trance/hard style trakcs into a sort'a prog sounding trance track..

This is the first time i've done this and i would love some feedback from you lovely people

it's called moment of clairty (sunday mix) and you can get it from http://www.djdeux.tk

thanks for your time guyz

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hey cheggy
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Registered: Aug 2002
Location: Sydney, Australia

Yeah man, this works. The beginning is a bit boring but gets better once your bassline comes in. The lead works really well with the melody too. The pad is a bit too overpowering though, it covers up the lead too much.

Good job though. I like this track.


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Old Post Dec-15-2003 05:27  Australia
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acell
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Registered: Jul 2002
Location: Melbourne

dam! thanks for your quick reply.. taken not of what you've said.. thanks for listerning

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moth
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Registered: May 2003
Location: New Westminster

Thats pretty awesome for a first trance track.

Um, ditch those ugly double claps though.


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acell
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Registered: Jul 2002
Location: Melbourne

hehe.. i'll look into thoes claps.. anyone else have any feed back?

Old Post Dec-16-2003 21:59  Australia
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Sean Walsh
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Registered: Sep 2001
Location: Downtown Vancouver

Comments as I listen:

-Nice Pads.
-Kick could be way louder.
-Basslines doesn't stick out very much.
-Yeah, Pads are way louder than everything else.
-Bassline sounds out of key at one of its lower notes.
-Lead is the best part of the track, but it sounds like a really big mess after buildup. Entire track needs some seriously remastering.

Overall, this has potential but there are a lot of production details that need to be cleared up.

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Lepric0rN
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Registered: Nov 2003
Location: Sogndal
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sweet and steady start. for a first slowtrance song its amasing.. continue and im sure you get a great Dj future.. the song gets bether and bether after 5-6 min its marvellous

great work pal

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acell
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Registered: Jul 2002
Location: Melbourne

thanks for your feedback dj-sean,

listerning over it again i agree with you.. does need mastering.. thanks for the feedback

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Sean Walsh
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Registered: Sep 2001
Location: Downtown Vancouver

Oh yeah, I forgot to mention that I really liked the arrangement of melodies, hence why I think the track has a lot of potential, hehe. Try to listen to it right after a pro tune and compare the way it all sounds.

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acell
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Registered: Jul 2002
Location: Melbourne

Lepric0rN,

i'm glad you liked it man! Yeah.. it is my first slow trance track.. everything i've been working on has been hard trance so this is new ground for me.. i want to role the 2 sounds together and come up with something like flutlicht.. but a little harder but as melodic..

thanks for listerning man.. much apreciated

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