Hey im 17 years old from NYC/NJ area USA I go by Astral NRG! Here is some stuff im working on right now needs much more work but i want your (ta'ers) feedback !

peace and prosper

oh yeah and the links...

Astral NRG - Break Of Dawn

Astral NRG - Artificial Race


Thank Box for letting me whore space.. hehe

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eey, i said id download, will comment later...

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Found Atlantis - Mixography [mix archive/mokumentary/my soul]?
i writed a song.

not bad, the break of dawn track will be good intro music, u really need to work on ur levels and EQing, theres a lot of distortion in this one

and that artificial race...i dont know what to say abt this... the leads r intresting, though theres still a lot of distorion in this one too. sounds like a techno/tech house thing...

not bad though, keep it up

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Found Atlantis - Mixography [mix archive/mokumentary/my soul]?
i writed a song.

pretty sweet tracks

the dawn is great for buildup/intro stuff....

i would build up on the second track some more... add some more layers and complexity to it

-serge

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10.24.05 James Holden & Damian Lazarus @ Spirit [will record]

.... i come for the music.

I like the intensity you set forth in your tracks, especially Artifical Race....of course, the EQ and levels need some cleaning up, and you may need to fine tune your high hats..perhaps a bit more subtle...other than that....keep on plugging away.....good work.

Now Break of Dawn definitely sounds like the work of an amateur, but in a good way....you aren't following the cookie-cutter structure of trance music thats saturating the scene right now...for that, I commend you.

Are you only using Soft Synths?

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"I don’t want to lead people, I want to tempt them, to create a new world for them, just for that very small moment when they are losing themselves in my music. I want to inspire them.”-Paul van Dyk

Thanks.. I know what u mean by the "cookie cutter" stuf i try to be original . I dont use all soft synths i have 1 keyboard ROland Jp-8000.. Serge that artificial race is just the intro part.. Cubase fux up whenever i open art race now fuxx. Anyways thanks for the reply dudes

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