this should be in amateur section !!

first thing to say..
you have some bad clipping from the moment the lead synth (the pwm alike synthie) kicks in so lower all volumes before recording then do a normalize

You did a very nice job in terms of synth programming. I like most of them allthough you might search a little further to make it a little less cheese (if you know what I mean, these synths have been used over and over again, nothing wrong with it its just my personal opinion, others will like it the way it is)

I have the impression the beat has been a one-minute thing to quickly add some rhythm, well don't. Only a beat is boring if there's no other percussion in it and the beat is overruled by the synths so it's a very neat start to make a decent remix. Keep it up and I'd like to hear the whole thing once it's finished

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I agree with dezma mostly. The synths are far too loud and i would take the main lead down an octave. And id change the cymbal sample ur using.

Cheers for the replies.

All percs/kicks etc are just there for general feel, all I am focusing on at the mo are the synths.

I'll fiddle around some more, cheers

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sounds nice...I too can't wait to hear the final.

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