yeh, it's still in progress, could you give specific note's? or is it all just shite? hehe
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Dec-27-2003 13:39
Massive84
Old Relic
Registered: Jul 2003
Location: Sequence Realm
hmm it doesn't really flow..
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Dec-27-2003 17:21
DJ Sanctuary
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Dec 2003
Location: Weymouth, UK
Re: Your first melody
Yeah - sounds nice and trancey. I especially like the crash cymbal effect halfway through! I wanna hear more than 40 seconds!
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Dec-27-2003 19:41
Domz
tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2003
Location: Wales
nah i cringe at it now
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Dec-27-2003 19:47
Digital Aura
Project5 Guru
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Sarnia, Ontario Christian Trance Producer
Dont be discouraged!
Dude..you have mad producing skillz !
But yeah, the melody (or lack thereof) is off.
Was that your hook? Just need a nice melodic hook...cuz everything else was fine! In other words ... your song was cool, but the music sucked!
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Dec-29-2003 18:35
ASOT100
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: May 2003
Location:
synths sound good but the composition of notes is pretty off
Dec-30-2003 10:39
Tranc3
tranceaddict in training
Registered: May 2002
Location: Santa Cruz, CA, US
Ok you need to look up some info on music theory, specifically in terms of consonance and dissonance.
My first melody - please comment! (645 kb)
Re: Your first melody
Dont be discouraged!
