Listening to tomorrow, it's bedtime for me now.

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The song has a nice soundscape and all the audio levels are good. I understand that you're looking to give it a chilled out feel but it doesn't really progress too much. imo that bell sounding lead gets a bit redundant. you may want to layer some more elements on top of it later on in the track or add some variance to it. I'd also add some more percussion elements and change the drum pattern up a little more at times so it doesn't seem so cookie cutter like. You have some very nice ideas here and I'd encourage you to do more with this track I'm eager to hear a more finished version.

It has a very nice feel to it but I agree it does need something to fill it out.
You could take it one of two ways...
The first being to work on more on the pads to beef them up and perhaps put in another melody.

The alternative would be to steal a vocal or get your own vocalist and perhaps do something creative in that way. This way would still benefit from some extra work on the track.
As always pervy Nem beleives that a woman semi whispering, semi rapping about all sorts of suggestive stuff would be cool... But Nem also needs to see his gf more often.

Cheers
Nem

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