Nice kick and perc work in the intro. Has an almost hard house feel to it, but well made. Nice intro synth also. Breakdown is starting to sound pretty interesting, but I was hoping for more of a build up out of the breakdown rather than just going straight back into it.

The melody of the bassline sounds a bit wierd where you have it go down a couple of notes. Maybe you could restructure the bassline's melody. I'm being picky though. I guess I got use to it, so maybe it was okay.

Lead is nice and powerful but something else @ 4:50 and on in the breakdown where you have the synths LP open up, it sounds a bit empty, maybe a pad or a bit of perc or something to fill it in a bit. also, again, you need some kind of build out of the break, even just a reverse sample would do the trick.

Track sounds good though. Its more hard house than trance to me though, not that that's necessarily a bad thing. Keep up the good work mate.

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Thank you! when u mentioned about it being to quiet at one point of the tune, i sometimes add a few effects muffled in the distant background to give a dark effect for the build... but this tune i just left it go quiet because when it starts to go quiet before the big boom the idea i had was to draw people into the soft quietness and then to be startled by the main melody just kicking in really loud all of a sudden... ive done that in one other track i did... but i will try and add something in there to see how it sounds anyways so it can be compared thanx

Hey Yevat,

Nice production there.
The one thing that perhaps I would like to see from a personal taste is more bassline.
I think perhaps the break needs something more in it. It's a nice effect when you faze the lead out but it might just be a little too long (Just thinking as a DJ there) for a dance floor to understand what the meaning of it was. Perhaps something else going on over the top of it?

There are a couple of types of producers here I have noticed. Those who produce for other producers and those who produce for dancefloors. Neither is wrong and both results can be spectacular I just think you seem as if you fit into the second category (as I would like to think I do).
Lots of nice energy there so keep it going.

As always the more experienced guys will most likely be able to help you more on the technical side than I can.

Cheers
Nem

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