Started this a few days ago, heres a clip of the breakdown..

http://www.insanegamers.net/dj-rob/...n low qual).mp3

this is my breakdown to main part sofar... Im trying to bring in some vocal overlays, just of female hums and sorts, and im gonna be upgrading the pads..

Hows it sound sofar, and any comments before I move on with the track ?

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Could use some filter on the piano. kicks/perc sounds great!
I'm not sure whether the strings should be brighter or not.. have you tried it?
I liked the melody alot, nice!

I really havent emphasized the use of the pad yet, I have a subtle one in there, still trying some sounds out that would sound very smooth and not too disturbing, and yea piano sounds too thin, im trying different effects with it ATM.

Thanks for the feedback.

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Sounds great man some great effects there.
Lovely melody and the overall sound quality is really awesome.
One thing I would suggest thought, is that you add some delay and reverb to that chord sound synth, give it abit more flowing feel, it sounds abit flat and simple as it is now.

I would love to hear a finished version of that when it's done.

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