My friend and i started producing this song a few weeks ago and here is what we have so far. Suggestions/comments welcome.. please tell me what u like/hate about it.

Thanks

http://matt.luethy.net/songs/tFi - ...Pass192kbps.mp3

http://matt.luethy.net/songs/tFi - ... Pass96kbps.mp3

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Was nice and smooth. IMO could use a little harder hitting bass line and kick. Since most of what you have is a build up, its really hard to tell how I could get into the chorus, because it cuts out after I pretty much just starts.

ive updated the song... the new files are in the same place as in the post up at the top. again.. please comment/suggest and whatnot.

thanks

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i really need some sort of comments here because i think it doesnt sound all the right and maybe somebody in this forum can help me out some by telling me what it is(or if im making it up.. which i doubt). I am now officially begging anyone who comes across this for some sort of comment on it... hows the beat.. too soft?.. too much of something.. too little of something... it sucks all together... just.. something.. anybody?

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Like the synths, but still not feeling the kick. And, this is just from my taste, a harder hihat.

It has an ambient feel, and if that's what you are shooting for, you got it, but I think some harder percussion could make it more moving.

thanks texaggie. i think i agree with you on making the beat stand out a bit more.. ill be working on it more this weekend and will have an update version of it then.

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hi,

i listened to your track & its pretty good....as some1 else points out, it gets cut abruptly just when the track is building up.....!!!!!! maybe u should post the full track...or work more on it....cheers

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This is pretty nice so far.

The kick could do with some compression and I think the overall percussion needs building up to make it a bit richer.
Don't like the way the snare builds up... Reminds me of a lot of the German hardcare from the early 90s.

As the track is at the moment I would say that the synths are really nice but the percussion is letting it down. A little too empty in that sense.

Keep it going though, this track just oozes potential.

Cheers
Nem

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Ditto on the snare. I know what it's like dealing with old school samples because I use FL Studio. Perhaps really filter the existing snare or find a different one. Give it some distance.