Few things changed, but I think sounding really gud!!

Let me know what you think

http://www.soundclick.com/util/Down...g.cfm?ID=885548

Some comments would really be appreciated

Not to bad - the kick sounds a bit distorted though

Nice sweep at 1:55, I don't really like the synth used at 2:15 but the melody is good.

The biggest problem with this track is the kick being distorted - fix that and it would be much better.

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i agree with alanzo on the bad sound at 2:15
it just sounds too computery if u know what i mean

as for the kick i dont hear it distorted but maybe that because i have shit speakers
and also to the main synths at 2:15 and later in the whole song, maybe add some reverbs, make it sound more dreamy
dreamy is good
overall ok track, can make it a lot better
keep up the good work

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