http://www.seantyasmusic.com/st-som...tter224clip.mp3

hope ya like...!

nice track, i like the guitar, maybe more delay or somehting make it more dreamy.. when everything comes togethers its really nice.. maybe u should make kick louder, also tone down the clap and add more open hats.

good stuff

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thanks rob, though im content with the amount of OHHs... i may delay out the guit a bit more i guess

As rob mentioned, kick and clap need some work. Kick should really stick out a whole lot more than it does, and the clap is too loud. Breakdown is pretty neat sounding, though a little thin IMO. I'm not really a fan of the guitar, but I guess that's a matter of personal taste.

Pretty good, but will be WAY better when kick and clap are improved.

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workin on it as you read this.. and about the thinness, i disagree.. played it in the car against some other stuff, sounded fine... dont forget, just cuz im not ubusing the jp8000 doesnt mean i have a thin lead... its about how it fits..

http://www.seantyasmusic.com/st-som...tter224clip.mp3 same file bname, i simply replaced it..

I was more referring to the first part of the breakdown before the electric guitar kicks in, perhaps "empty" would have been a better choice. The sound of the lead itself is fine.

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ahhh now i totally agree with you... probably a few things i could toss there to fill the void... wow listening again you're definitely right.. thanks for pointing that out!! peace

me likes sounds a lot like vanguard.. is that what you used? and maybe ReFX Slayer2 for the guitar?

Kick definitly needs some beefing up, get a multiband compressor.. they do a nice job with kicks.. other then that it's really melodic and the synths sound good.. good job!

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wish i had vanguard or slayer2... i hear they dont work in panther yet so im not wasting money..

ill take a closer look at the kick, though i think its the mix balance over necessary compression... i spent the better part of two years using unnecessary compression on kicks when all the needed was a touch of eq...

I like this even better than 'unreality'. It sounds very dreamy and warm, great stuff. How do you come up with your sounds?

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