Nice melodies, think this has a lot of potential. The bassline IMO sounds very soft-synth'ish and would be the main thing I'd change with this tune. It could also use a lot thicker percussions, the ones you have in there right now are pretty simple. The breakdown/buildup drags on a little for my tastes and it lacks energy after the buildup, but I think that's only because of the bassline and percussions. Work on those two elements and you'll have a great track here.

Cheers for the feedback man. Will have a look at boosting the bottom end frequencies on the bassline and maybe adding in another drum sound too. Thanks

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well i dont like the melodies in the beginning but thats just my tastes. the breakdown is really cool and the main melody awesome.
after the breakdown i think it needs a good driving hat cuz doesnt really add something imo.

Worth a listen definately.
nice job

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Percussions are ok, would benefit from a regular off beat open hat.

The bassline I don't like at all, just doesn't fit (maybe shift it all along 1/16) And as has been said is way to synthy.

Early melody sounds nice as does the lead. Pads could have a little more impact but thats just me.

As has been said there is potential. Find a track with similar parts and compare to see how you could make them sound better.

Keep at it

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Cheers guys. I have added a new bassline and have tweaked the hihats a bit. Think they were on a too higher frequency. Or my tweeters are just too good. Also have changed a few notes about so the track should sound warmer now.

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