http://www.seantyasmusic.com/st-childhood223.mp3

a lil different feeel of a song than what ive been doing, you'll see what i mean

sorry about that guys... http://www.seantyasmusic.com/st-childhood223clip.mp3

Really like the beginning of this clip, that bass sound is sweet. The higher frequency sound that comes in a bit later is okay, but I would love to hear it "ping" a little more if you know what i mean, try and get the filter to pluck it a bit.

First time I listened to it, I thought the EQ could do with a slight 1-1.5dB boost up high but it seemed okay when I listened to it a second time. Melody is quite nice, lead is okay but a little bit soft for my liking.

Overall, nice work.

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I really like the bass/drums and how much energy the song has. The melody (lead) is a little weak and needs work. the arp likewise needs to be a little more beefy. Maybe add some delay and more reverb to the arp. Make the track bang in a little harder after the break. The melody is excellent. Need more compression on the drums. Need more background sound effects.

ill get work on beefing up certain sounds, but exactly which drums require more compression?

i bring up my percussion extras and ill be left with a big mix mess... keep in mind in music not everything has to be screaming loud