Hey man ! I like your track ! I like a lot those strings that comes at 0:05. The piano is cool too !
But the whole track is too distorted. I think the level is too high. try to compress it a bit.

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Cheers for listening mate

The disortion may just be because its a low sound quality encode, 80 kbbps, but im gonna do a bit more mastering later on so ill try and get the levels down a bit!

anybody else got an opinion?

dude very nice piano...awesome....

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this sounds very nice, piano sounds a wee bit electronic tho. synth is not my taste at all, simple saws, mel is nice tho, bass needs work, percs need filling, defo sort it out + finish

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w: www.luketerry.com

i agree, i like the piano

but something about your arp lead... i think the very last note of the arpeggiation sounds off

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Oops i produce dubstep now.

NumberNin6 / Ethereal / Orana Project / Greenlight

Cheers luke and etherealsl

Ill keep ure comments in mind

Ill upload the full version in the week because im not gonna get it finished today!

Well with my love for the piano this song gives me chills mate.

All I would say is try to mellow the rumbling bass in the background at 0:33 and on. This seems to pull away from that amazing synth.
Maybe try a slightly more punchy bass.

Keep the postings up for when the FINALLY RELEASE comes out!!!!

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Cheers for listening mate

Full version will be up this weekend.

Along with a new re-mix i have done!

Just letting people know

if you are interested in re-mxing the track, I have a MIDI for the lead, Pads and Piano run of now, which i can send to u. Just PM or e-mail me : [email protected]