http://www.mp3unsigned.com/Showmp3.asp?mp3id=676&aid=28

new song me and my friend did and entered into a competition



feedback?

please vote too on the site(even though it won't affect the scoring for the competition, its done by judges)

thanks
John

First of all, that pad you use at the beginning, it sounds cool but its too loud and there are some frightingly powerful frequencies in there. Maybe you could clean it up a little bit with eq. It tends to dominate the mix way too much.

Work at 3:50 sounded cool but a bigger buildup would have been nice. Again, at 5:00, a bigger build up would have been nice.

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