It's a good tune, it just needs some mastering with the melodies to use it's full potential.
Relaxing, like the use of sounds. Bassline could use a more thick sound, just maybe.

Strings sound a little familiar, but generally it sounds alright.
Good job. far away from perfect, but still very good.

The bass sounds really flat or so, I'd try layering it with some other kind of bass sound. Melody and strings are pretty good, though the transition to the breakdown and then to the track again are pretty abrupt and you need to have a bunch of transitional effects in there for it IMO. Kick is okay, maybe a little soft, and percussions are pretty minimal so I'd consider beefing them up. The trancegate at the beginning sounds like it's straight out of 'The Orange Theme' and has a really dated sound to it; I'd try to stay away from brutally overused things like that. Aside from that, nice melody and has potential!

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Piano is a bit hot.

The overall mix sounds fairly thin, and there really isn't much of a logical progression into the breakdown...it just kinda comes in.

Biggest thing I noticed though - the non-percussive voices don't really keep up with the energy of the percussive voices.

It's got a nice feel, I think you just need to rework it.

Thnx for the comments guys..
I glad I got some comments on the end!
Yeah I really finished this track off to quick
When I have another music making attack
this is the first song to fix up..

Greetings CCPURNO

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