Here's a new track. I'm happy for this one, i think it's a good one, contrarly as the one before. Sounds a little like Push, as I like.
http://perso.club-internet.fr/fruit...0leave%20me.opm
Find what synth i used!

-->rename in mp3

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Last edited by open-mind on Mar-12-2004 at 23:18

a little like push?
pure like push
its push just slower than usuall
nice breakbeat, thats first
second really good mastering
third, really good melody, its nice trance quality stuff
perhaps just a little bit too repetitive
but still quality tune
keep it up

hey man u got a great sound goin but its all going to waste

all ur songs r repative...theres not enuff change ups and the same melody plays thru the whole song in all the songs ive heard of urs

gotta have sum simple melodies/secondry melodies that compliment the main melody...

ok cya man

Beginning could use more of an intro.

Mix could be cleaned up a bit when the next synth comes in at 0:57. I agree on the repetitive bit...you've got a great idea going, just need to ease up a bit on the gratiutous use of the same melody in the entire piece. Try just bringing it in when the synths start really coming in, and backing it up with your counterpoint, only with more presence (the counterpoint, not the lead). Have the lead slowly take over your background - it'l sound mint.