I am very happy , i created my first song ever .

I don't know how it sounds , so its up to you to decide .

I think its kinda loopy , but i will work on it some more and mix it .

so don't hesitate to critisize it .

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sorry forgot the downlaod linkdownlaod

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Originally posted by Dj Dovla I am very happy , i created my first song ever . I don't know how it sounds , so its up to you to decide . I think its kinda loopy , but i will work on it some more and mix it . so don't hesitate to critisize it .

YO buddy you links not working, tryed saving as and everything.
I would like to hear your song

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i know damn , i have to upload it somwhere first . but i don't know where . Have any idea

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yea my play

http://www.myplay.com/

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The links not working because it points to
'http://c:/WINDOWS/Desktop/Junk/DjDovla-123.mp3'



I'll check the tune out..

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here it is , should work now

www.myplay.com
email:[email protected]
pass:music

the song name is Dj Dovla - 123

so let me know what you think . I know it needs more work but ita a first .

plz sign out too ........... peace

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sounds great!

get some nice main vocals in there and your set

one suggestion would be to maybe half way through the song create some sort of a break

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One suggestion would be to maybe half way through the song create some sort of a break.

I would have to agree. Other than that nice track.

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well Its not Trance, more like house but its ok. You need to try and change and chop it up a bit to keep the listener interested

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i know thats what i said , its not bad but to boring to listen to the same beat over and over again . I am into trance too . and the track is house . but i will work on it some more this week I think . Get some better vocals there and some kind of a break or solo i don't know . I ll see . Thanx for responding .

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