i know its nto much of a review,
but i really liked the track.

i tend not to pick at tracks that
people post. and say, well your snare
was too quiet, etc etc.

but i know what i like and what i dont
like, and i liked your track

Hey Adam

now i must say this is brilliant!! very nicely constructed and i love the dark kinda feel to it.

Your are improving a hell lot since your lagoona track.


Now my only complaint is that the synth that starts around 1:38 just goes on for too long, very repetive. Maybe you could add more effects just to make it sound different and keep the audience going.

Now i don't think the song had enough detail IMO. I loved the ending part of the song the most IMO, cause it had more detail. The small breakdown had mood and actually constructed a nice beautiful effect.

your production skills are top notch, just add more stuff and this is definite signed material.

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holy shitballs

like the soupsmeister, i aint no musical scholar like peter andre or anything but i know what i like... this tune - i like... a lot. im always a sucker for a nice funky tribal beat and this is pulled off very nicely, melodies and stuff (yeh thats right, stuff) were also top notch.

k i better stop or else it may seem like im trying to suck your co...

it's a nice tune ok.

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lower the curtain down on me...

Wow, good stuff!

If I have one criticism it's that you might want to consider condensing the first four minutes into one or two becuase it does kinda drag on a bit, but everything after that is gold. With a bit of cleaning up, you have a pretty good chance of flogging this to a label imho.

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thanks for the replies guys

psy: good point! i know what you mean, it does drag on a bit. I dont wanna change too much though, but ill play around with some more effects n shit

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i have as much right to comment on music than the rabbitohs have on claiming the premiership so if i say its pretty fuckin choice does it mean anything? keep it up adam

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i like you

move over Sasha, here comes Adam Jace

A massive improvement on lagoona! tribal beats and melodies sit perfectly, but what impressed me the most was the mastering! I must say that this is definitely signature material! well done my friend

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Originally posted by S_madis move over Sasha, here comes Adam Jace

lol sid
i dont think so

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ok, did a few changes, re-arranges and shortened some parts
I also added some distortion to the first synth making it a bit fatter sounding

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Hey, HUGE improvement! Can tell you've been working hard to get this one sounding as killer as it is.

The highs sounds a bit muddy still IMO

The backwards melody bit (the bit psy was on about) goes on too long for what it does.

Love the track progression, love the sounds used, love the sound introduction, all good stuff.

Perhaps another little twist somewhere[last phrase b4 a breakdown?] on the bassline (IE instead of hte same pattern, 1 time go a note higher or lower.

Jace, What's next(by that I mean congradulations )

--djway

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nice.