Mellow alright ,
Love the kick!!!! Generaly its a nice tune, the break is abit empty for my taste. Nice bass and melody. Keep working on it
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Mar-23-2004 16:22
Mr.Mystery
Static Guru
Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Vantaa
Okay, the main thing is that everything is too simple. You need more elements, fx, secondary synthlines and most of all percs. The percs are too simplistic, they make the tune drag.
I like your melody and chord progression a lot tho.
Registered: Mar 2003
Location: Jacksonville, FL U.S.A.
it's really good. it is kind of minimalistic but not in a bad way.. it was really relaxing and sounded well produced in terms of the quality. good job.
Being the MASSIVE Leach that i am, i d/led this...
I like it.
the melody is really nice, theres no big obvious synths, which is good IMO. the breakdown isnt OTT either, which i like too. Like some of the others said, its pretty simple, but i like that. Its nice chilled trance, like its supposed to be (isnt it?) Adding more effects etc might make it into something that it isnt supposed to be. if you get me?
I think i would like to hear a bit more of a bassline in it? maybe antoher layer of bass, making it a bit more complex. or maybe making the bass a bit more prominant. (although my computer speakers are a bit shit, so it might just be that)
really good job.
192? :lol:
Mar-24-2004 16:05
Az
took me all the way back
Registered: Aug 2001
Location: Walking to John O'Groats for some spastics
like the melody a lot
kicks well gay tho
beef the percussion up and make it a little less airy fairy and you've got a half decent tune
Mar-24-2004 17:43
Luke Terry
tranceaddict oldskool
Registered: Oct 2001
Location: Newcastle upon Tyne
i like this mr kendall, dont like the acid wannabe bits in the middle tho, get some fx goin on, thicken the bass and yer laffin
