Have you ever played the original Mortal Kombat? That's what the intro to Last Unity sounds like to me. The kick just isn't turning me on. The signal to noise ratio isn't very good. I can hear the noise floor, and some slight buzzing, maybe a ground loop? The snare sound that comes in really drives the nail in the coffin.

1.) work on constructing / finding a better kick sound
2.) the bass layer isn't grooving with the kick.
3.) the transitions are kind of boring and predictable, work on that

The pad that comes in is slightly interesting. Try starting out with that and building on it.

Thanks for the feedback, ok so I said it wasn't properly mastered, maybe the bassline needs some work, that is my first ever mixdown using external instruments rather than all vsti's so yes, there is a buzz :-\ (I need better equipment) Any feedback on the other track? (contact) ? thanks

I do appreciate the feedback, its fine, please..show me no mercy

And ive just been informed that the download for Contact was broken..its fixed

Last edited by MoonWeapon on Apr-19-2004 at 21:15