Great tune. I really like the tone you get from the lead synth. It fits perfect with the synth strings backing it as well. Now for the constructive criticism....Personally, it's a little repetitive for my tastes. You've got two nice catchy riffs, but I think you could flesh 'em out a bit and have them take the song somewhere (if you know what I mean). Maybe bring other percussion instruments in and out of the mix. A triangle maybe or another hi-hat. Then maybe mix in another drum loop on occasion. Maybe add some drumfills/crash cymbals to further separate sections of the tune. Maybe even add another synth at the very end to give it a sense of "resolution". All in all; A diamond in the rough. I LIKE it. Bear in mind that this is all just my opinion, and that and ten cents won't even get you a cup of coffee any more. -Glyph

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hey A F, you are producing? Nice
Didn't get a chance to listen, but I downloaded and want to make it easier for the others, so here is a direct link

http://216.139.66.213/files/traxins...AnotherLife.mp3

hope it works, I tell you what I think about the song later.

PS: Expect to get some mail tomorrow or the day after

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Originally posted by djdawn PS: Expect to get some mail tomorrow or the day after

I just recieved it!
And thanx for the link!

Nice beat........ I like it........just some advice though.......progress the beat with some of what Glyph mentioned.....
and also maybe add some thick heavy duty generated by you " BASS " to it....or maybe ruff up the bass line riff.....

it's nice style