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Right, commenting as I listen...
Nice intro.
Waaay too much reverb on the hats.
The clap doesn't fit at all, sounds way too plastic.
The piano is too dry compared to everything else.
Breaks sound way too simplistic, mainly due to the lack of other percs than the obvious and hardly any variation.
Lack of additional fx and submelodies really make it sound one dimensional.
Way too long for the elements it has - it just keeps repeating the same pattern over and over and by 5 minutes I am already bored.
Right, what you need to do is seriously vary those percs and add some variation to the overall tune. What you have here is the front but you have nothing beneath it. These kind of tunes definitely need to have more than what meets the eye. Sure, you've got new synth layers coming in all the time but they all play more or less the same pattern.
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Nice! Markus will love it 
