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listening 
that flange / phased bass (kinda 303 sounding) is really cool. it sounds solid so far (i'm 2:30 in)
ooh thesee breaks are very very interesting. very different and i like them
i'm around the 5:00 mark now. i like what is going on, i haven't heard the original before, but if there are vocals, there is just enough space left in the mix to put them in and have a really nice balance.
also, i would experiment with adding a really nice pad (from atmosphere ) because there is definitely room for that, and the harmony created from a pad line would set this up to the next level. (use it to lead the emotions up and down.. like a subtle controller of 'the energy')
as for technicalitites, the overall volume is a little low, but that can be taken care of with compression and limiting later on. otherwise it sounds pretty good to me 
i would say that adding in a pad and vocals would really be nice for this track. i'm gonna have to go check out the original to see where this came from.
later,
-rob
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