heres a sample just over 2 minutes of my latest track...

any suggestions

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3rd review of the night thats alot for me Im gonna try nd listen to a bit more know, i shouldnt expect reviews and not give them out.

Anyways the tune: The percs at the start, you really something else but a kick, some hats or FX. The bass - its odd, im really not sure what it achieves. Clap needs alot of EQing, a bit reverb wouldnt go a miss. Realy mate, put some closed hats and other perc loops in there. Synths are well wierd, bell type, really not my thing at all. The levels are a little high aswell, its causing a little disortion. Chords at the end dont grab my attention.

I would start again if i was you, but if you wanna finish this track, work on it... alot !

Alex

Hola amigo,

The worst thing in the sample is the Clap, It really needs some EQing and compressing. I think you should have sticked to the melody that comes in in 00:55 it sounds good. Some of the other melodys sound out of sync. The synths are too loud as well, you should reduce the voulme abit. Yea and some extra perc would be cool .
Its better then your previous work mate, keep working.

EM//

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Reduce the cutoff on the bass freq a bit and then boost the levels with eq and add compression. Again, more perc is needed and the clap does sound poor. Synths are too loud so yeah basically agree with what has already been said. Some nice ideas though, keep at it.

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