The mp3 file has all these blips and skips in it for some reason. Other than that, this tune has some good ideas man! A find that i don't hear the bass come out too much (I'm listening on some Event Ps6 monitors btw...). And in my opinion, u could use some heavier percussion . But overall, definately worth the download ahah

___________________
Create your own style damnit

haha its pure garbage/ shit out of a box






























JUST kidding

for a newb, its pretty good
u know ur structure, u just need to work on mastering and quality of sounds pretty much, and use of reverb for the synth, its pretty good other than, MUCH better than other newbs i heard in my life hehe,
keep up the good work, ur getin there

peace out

___________________
www.sunquestproductions.com
www.myspace.com/sunquestproductions
Contact:[email protected]
Sunquest Productions Presents: Sunquest, Summer Sessions, Electric Pulse, Ronnie Allstar, Solarium

The kick’s got plenty of thump, but the bass is a tad too quiet in comparison. Percs also sound good, but get boring. You need to add some more layers and mix things around a bit. Also the levels could take a bit of rethinking, but this is a brilliant beginning.

thanks for the feedback spin doctor. it always helps to get somem good input from others. as i continue to work on my track i will let you know when i get done with the reworked version. hey what kind synths would you recommend? right now i am using the pro-53 demo, but i want to find something different

Hmmm, no idea really, I stick to reason as much as possible.

However, Absynth is good, though I haven't tried making any leads on it, just ambient pads and stuff. The Audo Realism Bass Line is great for all your acidy sounds too!

The percs at the start are cool Bass needs looooaaaaddddss more high, infact i would say add 2 more basslines, one thats high in sound, like a couple of octaves above the one u got atm, and a mid bass, thats covers mid frequencies. I could send you some presets if you use fruity, but it says u use reason didnt it?dunno canae remember.

Percs need fattenin up, put a clap in there every second and a powerful hi hat. Synth at that breakdown is cool, sounds kinda fizzy, and disorted, which is uber cool. The snare sound is lame, no 2 ways about it. I hear your going for a Hard Trance sound, if so the lead is spot on. Keep the lead the same, just thicken the bass + percs, and some counter leads + Fx etc.

Overall a cool tune with potenital, and its better than my second ever tune was, i was still and ejay then

Alex

whats up terraplex. i am actually using FL with the pro53 demo. lol... i know i am a beginner but its all good. thanks for the good feedback and yes i would like to get some of your presets. do you use fruity?

Mate i use use good ol fruity aswell!

Do you have MSN? If so ill catch u on there add me: [email protected]
if not email me on that address and ill get some samples to you.

I hope i can help!

CHeers

Alex