Just finished my WIP and renamed it to SANCTUM SANCTORUM. The song is New Age.

http://elujin.vze.com - Go to SINGLES section.

C&C please

-Arthur/Elujin

Hmm, very nice.
Might be just my bad headphones, but something seems "off" in the sound.
Not really noticeable, and might be just me, but you might wanna look into it.
Apart from that, all good.

hmm, the onyl thing that might be a TAD off is the Wailing guitar.

But i've had diff opinions on it - more positive then negative. SO for now it stays heh. is that what was off?

Anyway, thx for the comment

Hmm, its more a matter of the sound sounding somewhat "muddy" is the best way i can put it.Possible something to do with equalization, but i really don't know enough to judge.
But really, its nothing, i hear worse on commercial songs all the time.

hm start off dreamy

the pad is to much focused on the mid area..makes everything muddy..

nice sounds, but just not clear enough.

you introduce a break part with a weird bass pattern at 2.19

i have no idea what that suppose to mean, it just feel another song now..

few things you should fix, main important is the mix , second is the arrangment, but thats taste for everyone it's different .

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

hehe - thx for input. I think i will try to work on that a bit. With the bass, thats a heavy-guitar i used with adiff build up for a drum beat. Dunno what I was thinkng, felt like I needed a change from the redundant dreamyness. (That was my experimental part - never done that before).

Thank you for the comment