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I love the pads! There are some freakin good ideas here, i havent heard the original though. There are some things that could be better. Work on the bassline first, its too high.

Cheers!
Alot better mate.

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wel I tihnk by the pads you mean the orchestra samples which are taken from the last samurai just like the original ...

needs work...my basses always suck

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ooo dlin da track now

superb remix by solid globe all be it a bit basicy maybe.

will probably enjoy it again for the sample

review once iv listened

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well sampled iall give ya massive credit

needs alot of work mate, bass is octaves to high as said.

the break is copied off solid globe u know where its just the kick
thats good tho i luv the way the kick sorta builds with strings automaticly, tho that fx kinda blows the build all out.
The snare build needs fx with it going off.

more percussion. the snare needs to be changed imo mate.

the bassline really needs to be kicking it with the strings. But u might be doing a more progressive style so....

the 3:11 snare bulid that reallllly needs rehaul that doesnt feel rite at all.


not sure but i think me and u should go for a "Best Nickelson Yin Remix" or collab or something i dunno.

I definatly at some point am going to remix it, so if u want to collab or somethin just say.

hehehe

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1. as said twice already, bass is way too high.
2. buildup at 1:05ish is too quick, sounds off, drop it or extend it a tad. the one at 1:35 is fine. or, just have the buildup/drum fade off into the track another couple of seconds.

3. part near the end of the sample, timing just sounds off, the sound is changing too much too early (variation to keep track interesting).


I think it might be cool rather than building up with the original track, build up your own nice and mellow for a minute and build into your energetic sound, and bring back the original briefly like 2 mins in and bring it in the break, because as one guy said, you've got some good ideas going on here. it just sounds off having the original orchestra fade off so quick and your track come in so quick, sounds spliced (which it probably is in a way).

love the effect at 2:15ish, 2:23ish. don't over due that, keep that just the way it is =)

lots of muddiness with timing, like you just wanted to throw all your ideas into this sample and let listeners sort out what might be good and what isn't to help ya out.

I think what you got is worthwhile pursuing for sure.

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problem is thats the only snare sample I have ..

collab? sure I use fl studio ...

gonna work some more tommorow or tonight..

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ok link is now updated fixed bass percs and most of the uprolls and timing ....added some fx....please comment on the new file...

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Have probs to download this ..Really like to hear it!

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timing is better, but i still have some personal taste issues with how strong your bass is and how strong overall the track you have laid out comes in after the sample.. i realize its a sample you have and are limited in what you can do/work with because of that...

but that's just a personal taste issue, so that can be taken so.

i just have an affinity for epic intros like that and then getting slammed out 20-30 secs in by a hard bassline, if you're going to take that route, do it right. on that note rather than bringing in the bassline while the sample still plays, try a fade away and then bring the bass/track and cut the sample when the volume gets low, but i still think your bass overall is still a bit strong and overpowering.

a lot of the timing issues i bugged u about before have been fixed, so kudos on that. and i still like the overall sound and your approach, and would like to see it finished if you're willing. =)

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slyxster | johnson & corbett | deepwav3 |
Progressive Transmission on Party107.com every Wed @ 5pm PST (8pm EST / 1am GMT)
Pacific Coast Frequencies on Danceradioglobal.com - trance every 1st Tues @ 4pm PST (7pm EST / 12midnight GMT)
Upcoming Gigs: none scheduled
Past gigs:
Phoenix Echo Aug 8th, 2009,
Believe @ Redroom, Feb and May 2009
Gareth Emery Boat Party - Aug 8th, 2008
Phoenix Outdoor Party - Aug 16th, 2008