just finished the first draft of my 2nd tune off the album i am working on. let me know what you think, any feedback would be great =)
fixed the link hmb - missing the opportunities
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Last edited by capricorn15 on Jun-01-2004 at 12:03
May-31-2004 07:22
capricorn15
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fixed the link =)
anyone have any feedback thnx =)
Jun-01-2004 12:03
extalin
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2003
Location: Jacksonville, FL U.S.A.
awesome work hadi. this is some of the most unique material i've heard. really relaxing and deep.
I like the beat alot, nice executed, but in my opionion they are abit to loud, takes over to much of the melodies. Perhaps to lower the volume on the hi-hats and percs. I wouldnt claim to know how to make good beats but like I said, I think they are too loud. Just a tad
now to what I really like. The break 5 min and uptil around 8 mins...its really uplifting, inspirational in lack of other words. Itīs like when the hero in the movie has just realized his true powers and slowly rises to the occation. This feeling drops after 8 mins but that's ok. It works anyways. Im not to happy about the chugga-chugga-chugga-chugga style on the ride/cymbalhit/scratch or whatever it is.
nice stuff
kinda ulrich schnauss style
don't think the beat fits with the track that much, would rather go for a downtempo beat or atleast something more ambient, cause this isn't exactly a dancefloor track hehe.
it's a bit long too, but good tune
i agree with Haak here, that the style of the track leans toward a more ambient..kind of chill-out style, so a less harsh beat might help here...but it sounds as if it'd be great to start a set off with
no need to use an Airwave-style kind of beat where there is bass on relaxing parts...something downtempo and chill-out would make this track better imho
other than that this is good work man
Jun-02-2004 17:36
EternalMusic
Antonio Gomez
Registered: Jul 2002
Location: Tiberias, Israel
Like i said on MSN -
This is really sweet . After a second listen i think you need a different beat as the others said. With all the shiat i like it .
Great peace of work!
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