I like the first hit-hat sequence. The first synth is too synthy IMO. The second one too. The melody sounds pretty good.

After a bit, it gets repetitive. Something needs to be changing, like synth LFOs or the like. I think if you add strings it could be a lot more uplifting. Like have them come in slowly, then slow break then back to beat with strings.

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sorry bud hardly hard style.

more need to be done with percussion....hi hat doesnt suit...needs a more filling bass to get rid of the emptyness...break beat bit sounds alright...work on the melody a lil....goes through the track to much...

yeh

work on it