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Vivid Boy
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Registered: Sep 2001
Location: T.O
Need some creative criticism

first all big ups to loca for helping me out a ton with photoshop and i mean a ton..i came into photoshop not knowing a thing except how to cut my head out of pictures and add them to porno pics...


anyways ive yet to create a company logo and finally decided to get down to work and do it and this is what i came up with... i need some creative criticism from everyone...let me know what u think or what i should switch...take a really good look at them and feed me with some opinions please

heres the first one






im planning on changing it to black instead of fading tthe lettering




and the second with different lettering






any comments please share

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Boomer187
Spicy Hotdog



Registered: Aug 2001
Location: USA

what is it, Aquilo? I can't see the i too well if it is. might wanna make it a bit more visible.

and I dunno if you care, but what about making the design something HVAC-esk, like having something to do with what ya do. Like try to incorporate duct work into it, or try to add an effect to the a so that it looks like it is blowing.


other than that, it is clean and simple, and that is good.

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nchs09
Traceaddict in training



Registered: Sep 2003
Location: Inside your mum

pics of ur mum?

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TAnt
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Registered: Apr 2004
Location: San Antonio, Texas

I think the second one looks great Vivid.

You have done a really awesome job, especially for a new photoshop user..

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Vivid Boy
TA's GodFather



Registered: Sep 2001
Location: T.O

yeah taht was my original idea..to do some with hvac but i decided against it cause everything i came up with looked gay..and i loved the symbol i designed so i wanted to stick with it

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Boomer187
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Registered: Aug 2001
Location: USA

Reminds me of the Ring.......my precious.


if no duct work, put some waves on the a....oh and I forogt to mention that the a reminds me of a mullet...hehe. in a cool way. :P

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butterfly
melissa



Registered: Apr 2002
Location: West CoCo, CA

i think i liked the faded lettering better, if it was a little more readable.

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Vivid Boy
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Registered: Sep 2001
Location: T.O

quote:
Originally posted by Boomer187
Reminds me of the Ring.......my precious.


if no duct work, put some waves on the a....oh and I forogt to mention that the a reminds me of a mullet...hehe. in a cool way. :P


rthats awesome cause most hvac guys DO have mullets...see it does symbolize what i work with

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Lumps
Supreme tranceaddict



Registered: Jun 2003
Location: nershide

I like the first one better, but darken the letters a little. The logo has nice colours that work well together and (IMO) looks pretty professional.

edit :: letters in the second design are too smushed together.

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alffla
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Registered: Jan 2004
Location: Hong Kong

i don't really like the gradient text..

you should probably make the text size bigger or at least bolder.

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Tranc3
tranceaddict in training



Registered: May 2002
Location: Santa Cruz, CA, US

I think you said you were gonna do it, but darken the lettering on the first one, and then it's better than the second one. It's got a better design, it's just readability that's the major flaw.

Oh and what's the hook underneath the "a" for? It'd be cool if you could incorporate the other letters into the "a" or maybe just one other letter. Cause the hook just looks like it's...there...with no purpose. If you put another character there, then it'd be awesome. Maybe a "d" for design, that way the logo makes you think "Aquilo design" and then you read it and you see Aquilo air system design

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trancebrat
Terry Bones' wife



Registered: Oct 2003
Location: San Antonio, FL & Frameries, BE

Hey Eric...I like the first one. I agree with everyone else that the letters need to be darker.

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