Review:

The kick/drums are very trite. Nothing unique about them at all.
The Bass is deep, evil and rather pleasant.
The kick rolls are annoying and vastly detract from the song.
I love the emotion in your breakdown ~3:10, it has potential.
later in the breakdown- A little too happyjack for my taste and the melody lasts a little too long. It starts to sound like you just threw notes on to a sequencer page after 8 beats. Melodies longer then 2 measures should always be reconsidered.

Production quality sounds good for the most part. The lead is a little too loud and the whole song could use more compression.

This song lacks any "trancy effects" for the drug users to trip to and to aid in DJ mixing.

Just constructive criticism so take it as that and nothing more.

plus
nice and clean percussion
the break is nice
it started out kinda nice

minus
the bassdrum roll is annoying
a little loud introduction melody
there is something wrong with the build up..
yeah it is definitely cheesy IMO
more cheese
the percussion are maybe clean, but still there should be alot more of them..

conclusion
Although it has some nice parts, I like the "duh-dih-duh-dah" part of the melody.. but the melody is warn out.. and overused.. heard it before...

4/10

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