First impression was...sweet mother of pearl that synth rocks!
And the whistling accompaniment is very ...um... folksy...but cool!
I'm trying to catch everything that's happening, but I'll definitely have to listen again! (and again..and again!)
Love your creative melodies, and even more creative choice of synths!
Fact is... I love it! Loved it like your PINS one!

Your music seems to be more like melodic ideas rather than full songs. Both of your tunes are around 4 minutes...while most tracks in this genre are around 7 minutes... not that this is a problem, but both tracks seem to be unfinished! I dont mean unpolished...just incomplete.

This is really, really good... I'm into this stuff but I know that most probably are not. Just know that there IS a niche for your style!


Keep it up SLEEP!!! This is one of the few that I won't be deleting from my hard-drive after listening to it!

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mmmm sexy. Loooove that synth.

kinda like... chicane meets trance control.

From a trance point of view, the song just lacks a good progression... it doesn't seem to go anywhere... it's smooth and great for relaxing/chillin to, but it's not exciting enough to get played in a club or something. Percussion and bass are similarly lacking, and although the synth has a great sound, it's not gonna blow the roof off of any club.

I guess it depends what you're after. Most of what I said was just comments on the style... nothing personal against your track... which is a friggin awesome tune if I do say so myself.

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That opening synth line sounds really cool with the stereo effects and everything. The claps sound a little muffled. Overall I like the song but it just doesn't go anywhere. It would be better if you kept going with it and had it evolve into something new at the end. Nice work!