i see lots of good ideas in this track...but i think you're using the wrong sounds to do it. try getting your hands on drum sample kits and stuff like that...and mess around with samples in editing programs, and get good sounding percussion, instead of just the same old stuff. the same thing goes for your synths.

i say this because musically i think it's a really good track...but i think you should spend more time experimenting with how you wanna get that music across. see what i mean? maybe not...hope it helps.

keep it up.

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I also see lots of cool ideas here! Very refreshing!!
I dont think the sounds chosen are particularly the problem as they DO in fact lend themselves to the track name...PINS... aptly titled I figure!

Lead synth does seem a little flat... maybe needs some reverb? Some body... something...love the counter melody woven in with your lead, and the pads seem nice. Love your use of volume fades rather than those overused frequency sweeps everyone else uses these days. The ending is the only fault...it seems to end unfinished!

This doesn't sound "dancey" or even too "Trancey" but its some GREAT ELECTRONICA fo' sho!

Dude, you have a good brain there for melodies! I expect we'll hear some great stuff from you again!
Glad you got the link working!

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