Sorry for bumping but I really would like at least one comment. It's just a small thing but it really helps.
Jun-07-2004 19:08
DJ_Silverstone1
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: May 2003
Location: Isle Of Man
downloading now
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Jun-07-2004 19:30
shockwavedj
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Jan 2004
Location: Coslada, Madrid, Spain
yeah, man, I'm also waiting for at least one comment to my last track (here) and thinkin to bump it up too... anyway I'll put the first stone down.
From an artistic angle: I think you should better define the "leit motiv" of your composition. IMO sometimes it's a bit harmonically confusing... but that's only my opinion.
From a technical angle: the rhythm seems to be "very heavy"... but I'm not the best to talk about uplifting rhythms. You should also spread over the stereo the ritmic elements: claps, ohh,... not only the synths. And make more rhythm variations. And try to keep clean the mids, so I think they are a bit muddy.
Otherwise I like listening to other kinds of trance.
Jun-07-2004 19:48
DJ_Silverstone1
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: May 2003
Location: Isle Of Man
i like its hard edge sorta airwave progressive style.
i like the melody.
its very complicated and weird. but i do like it!!!!
yea the mid does need to be tweaked
otherwise its pretty good and the main thing is it is actually very different.
i can see this growing on me weirdly.
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Jun-07-2004 20:34
kotus
tranceaddict
Registered: May 2004
Location: Columbus, USA
Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it!
Jun-07-2004 20:57
DJ_Silverstone1
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: May 2003
Location: Isle Of Man
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Jun-07-2004 21:07
Digital Aura
Project5 Guru
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Sarnia, Ontario Christian Trance Producer
nice tune!
yo Kot!
love the heavy beat...lovely synths you've chosen. TASTY. Dont think the mids are muddy...its just the choice of patches probably.
Lead synth sounds a tad de-tuned ... a little flat I'd say.
Especially at 2:00 - 2:20...
I love the name of your track! Wish I could think of great names like this... I envision a UFO in this tune! Ending needs some work.
Personally, I like more melodious stuff...but this has great production value and you've put some cool things into this.
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Jun-08-2004 00:17
eulerfx
BELIEVE IN ME
Registered: Apr 2004
Location: Boulder, USA
I really like the structure of the song. The harmonics are not outstanding and like others said the sounds themselves need work. But other than that, the arranging is good.