Spad - Add More (first tune, feedback needed) (OFFLINE)
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I made this a couple of months ago but didn't have the internet to post it anywhere
Any feedback would be greatly appreciated, especially any mastering tips. I'm pretty sure it's going to sound quite muddy on a decent soundsystem because my setup is shit.
Any advice greatly appreciated.
Ta muchly.
edit: first person to identify the vocal sample gets a gold star.
Last edited by Spad on Jun-17-2004 at 19:17
May-27-2004 17:17
placebo
501xx
Registered: Jun 2003
Location: Somewhere
spacey stuff....
i love it...
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May-27-2004 20:18
Spad
wise sage of the forest
Registered: Jun 2001
Location: Chesterfield ,UK
quote:
Originally posted by placebo
spacey stuff....
i love it...
nice one, thanks
May-27-2004 21:11
Fundamental
Still Alive in '25
Registered: Apr 2001
Location: Scotland
Quality work Spad! I really enjoy listening to this kinda stuff.
The tune has such a nice atmosphere and the percussion is very good. I don't think that harsh buzzing noise really fits in so well though - maybe if you softened it up a bit, added a bit of reverb it wouldn't stand out so much. Even with that said, I really really enjoyed it and will be listening to it a lot more.
...and you better be working on something new dammit.
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May-28-2004 17:07
Haak
analog evading shark
Registered: Jun 2001
Location: Oslo, Norway
wow this is really good for a first tune, good for any tune i'd say. nice atmosphere and sounds. the bass could be a bit more bassy, maybe a bit deeper
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Sarnia, Ontario Christian Trance Producer
whats wrong with me?
I dunno..Im not gonna comment because I must have missed something.
How would you classify this genre...cuz it aint trance! I was waiting for the melody and it never happened. LOL..in fact, I dont think anything happened!
Kudos for nice FX and production values though!
*sigh* back to my cave.
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Jun-01-2004 00:38
Spad
wise sage of the forest
Registered: Jun 2001
Location: Chesterfield ,UK
Wow, thanks I'm genuinly surprised the feedback's been this good
Digital Aura - I dunno how you'd classify it. Definetly not a club track (maybe a queue-to-get-into-club track).
Cheers everyone.
Jun-01-2004 02:51
burns
Jeep Sex
Registered: Apr 2001
Location: uK
This is well decent. Agree on the bass, i can barely hear it, but apart from this element, you got a quality sounding peice going off. Little bit muddy yes, but for your first tune this is understandable.
Keep it up !!
Jun-01-2004 08:45
BuRoLovesTrance
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2004
Location: Nitra, Slovakia
good produced track, very moody and thats the things I like very much, but one thing that I don't like is the intro, try to replace the snares or the percussion with something else, something more soften...this is intro is too hard for the whole moody mix....anyway...good work.
Jun-01-2004 10:53
Az
took me all the way back
Registered: Aug 2001
Location: Walking to John O'Groats for some spastics
absolutely fucking amazing mate, what did you use to make it?
only thing lacking is a filthy fucking bassline
whats wrong with me?
