Well I guess I can comment now

What can I say, I don't really have suggestions, everything sounds great. Except for the break, it sounds a bit amateuristic in comparison with the rest of the track. Also, you might give the track a bit more enrgy when you switch from the breaks to the regular beat. But that's about it Melody, bass etc sound pro!

Nice tune man, a couple of comments:

-Could use a little more low end. Doesn't sound like there's much sub-bass in either the bassline or the kick.
-Really not a fan of the breakbeat. It seems like it's just in there to fill up some space and should just be removed completely IMO. If you do want to keep the breakbeat, then change it to a more danceable pattern and emphasize the snare/clap a LOT more.

Other than that, enjoyed it a lot. Have heard a lot of improvement from you in the past 6 months or so =)

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melody is kewl. very chilling
nice pads, the breakbeat is OK, could be much better, i love that women voice in the background, sounds like a dolphin , or did i get it the other way around? hehe
(also sounds like one of those women sex samples (i have them too ) )

good stuff,
take care m8

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tnx everyone

ya i found on a refill, so i went creative..pitched up the sample, you hear what you think, a horny dolphin, and pitch down you hear a horny woman

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

heey fahad,
nice tune mate! really enjoyed listening. my only comments would be to get rid of breakbeat and change the climax. like sean said it seems like its there just to fill up space. and climax is well not really a climax. maybe the lead could be a tad louder, but thats just taste i guess nice work

john

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Sounds nice...

Like the clap, though you could bring it out a bit more...


hmm.. Am I deaf or something. I didn't hear any horny dolphin / woman...

cheers for the replies, am gonne change the breakbeat , use different perc and kick and clap for it, if it wont work, il just remove it .

anymore comments?

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Dropped my opinion on MSN already . Anyway, cool stuff. i like what you've achived.

P.S - The breakbeat is still shitty though .

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I agree about the break, if you want to open up the general sound and make it sound more fluid, add some panned delays to those pads. Clap needs more reverb i feel. And maybe add some slight distortion to that bass to warm it up slightly. I do feel there is a lack of drive in this track, but your definatly improving and im sure within a few months you'll be able to sort that out

Geo

Ignoring those breaks, pretty nice track. My only criticism is that the track doesn't have a lot of power or drive. Perhaps bringing up the volume of the pads, or layering the synth a bit more would help. I'll drop you more comments later on MSN.

Pads and strings sounds very good! Lead is OK too
Good ... hope you think the same If I tell you .. best work from Massive84? Am I right? Take care. Over and out.

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