Here's a track I just finished, I think it's pretty neat. Any feedback appreciated.

Click the pic for the MP3 if you haven't realised already.

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Last edited by Woody4eva on Jul-20-2004 at 00:09

Nice tune there. The melody is really nice. My "shanghai moment" came at 2:07

I think that the bass sounds a little bit weak, which is a little to do with the chord progression, and a little to do with the sound you've chosen.

Overall nice work!

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Monsoon - Astrosurf

OK lets hear this.

Melodies are nice and chilled.

The bass is a maybe a bit too weak.. Could be fixed like pho mo said.. or just a EQing issue.

Hah.. Was there a break or not. Got to listen again to make sure.

OK.. as I listen I will comment.

Intro is good.

As the others have said, bass is weak.

Lead and background synths are good, well-balanced.

I'd say just fix the bass and it's a good track!

Thanks for the comments guys.

I had a bit of an issue with the bass; as I've got a subwoofer, I didn't know at which setting would make it sound normal on everyone elses speakers. I had actually EQed alot of bass off of the sub bass, and it was still adequately bassy on my speakers. I guess I will just add some more of those lower frequencies and then the bass won't be so weak for everyone else.

Thanks again.

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cool perc at the start.

first bassline is funky.

Ah now second bassline, have to get used to these kinda bass sounds.

kick could use a bit of more volume, maybe 2-4.

nice sounds in the intro.

there is a sudden bass chord change in the intro, not so keen about that.

the acid line sounds so 3osc, needs to be more better imo.
i wish the breakdown had some nice phat square pads.

ya i agree i do feel some Shanghai moments in this tune, due the leads i think, i don't know why hehe.

Synth choices are nice, expect maybe the bass and acidline.

the main part needs something imo, no idea what, just that little extra.

Nice work, 7/10.

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