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this tune clips reallllly badly, but never mind... bass is nice, perhaps a bit basic, kickand percs are nice. The actual tune seems a bit scattered and simple, i think it could do with some more elements to fill it out like maybe some more layered synths or an extra paddy sound, the break sounds very basic and gets a bit boring.. but i guess thats just the style of the track, the fx are very nice. the trebly synth that comes in is nice, but again, its quite solitary i think it could do with another synth or 2 to fill out the mix. Also when the beat starts with this new trebly synth, the bass cant be heard at allreally. it sounds like just a kick and synth and a hithat. so perhaps the levels need some playing with. The melody is nice and has lots of potential, but i think its currently its too basic (thats just my taste) but also i think the levels could do with some adjusting, sort out the clipping, maybe add some more reverb here and there and more layers. Idea is nice, but i think it deserves some touching up 
keep at it coz i do love the melody i think it would be powerful with a bit more work.
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