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the whole thing clips which is a shame, and also, as M1cro5lave said, the quality is quite poor, mostly due to the clipping and it sounds very over compressed. I also dont like the structure at the begining, i dont like how the bassline changes in only the first few bars, and it doesnt feel like there is any build up to the first break. its just suddenly there! also, the percs bore me, and i think ruin the track. that hi hat thats used in every trance track is a bit too loud and should be dropped in some places in my opinion, perhaps some extra layers or percs would help it out a bit. lovely tune, i dont think ive heard the original!!! I deffinately hate that hi hat. synths sound nice, bass is nice but i dont think it should really pan across the speakers like that. in general u aught to keep the low frequencies in the centre, especially if you are hoping for it to get played in a club. pan the higher frequencies all you like but i dont think its agood idea to have that bouncey pan on the bass. It could benefit from a few more elements in my opinion, especially in that second break. And those crashes that come in, OH MY GOD LOOSE THEM!!! lol those crashes ruin the feel of the track for me, they are so sudden and boring, if you insist on keeping them, lower the levels and put some reverb on or sumin i would. Only major complaint is the clipping and quality, when it all kicks off, i can hardly hear it. so thats all i can say about it really. hope this helps.
mike
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