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Dana-O-
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Registered: Jul 2004
Location: Tel-Aviv
Sneaker Pimp Dana O - Regroup (Original Mix) [192]

Ok since my music got rejected from many lables i gaved up...
so here's my "Rejective" tune enjoy...
http://beibe.tnnet.fi/~tonza/mp3/Da...iginal_Mix).mp3


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Old Post Jul-18-2004 14:36  Israel
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Jamz
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Registered: Jul 2004
Location: England
The Mad Regent

Hi, i just had a listen to your track. My opinions might be irellavent to you but some people think my advice or knowledge is top of the line and some people say i have no idea what the hell im talking about. So judge for yourself.

Basically when i first started the song i knew strait away it was gonna be fairly heavy. has a nice beat and its pretty full. The songs a great idea and well worthy of a play on Digitally imported but label wise its not quite up there. The song has talent and if you can make tracks like this then you must be pretty Talented to. (Perry said u have a talented body btw :P )

Basically i think the song lacks Originality and its pretty Basic in ways. It was just the same old beat, fade off, build up, beat senario.
What i sugest u do is try to enhance the situation but dont make a mess of it. Try to put some Originality into it and make the Tranquility more effective.

Its like Tiesto said "So many People have computers and are making music now days, labels dont look for just good music they look for that extra special thing in a person"

Hope i helped in some way


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pho mo
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Registered: Jan 2004
Location: Darwin

It's definitely a nice tune!
You've obviously got the talent to make a killer tune. Keep it up, and good luck dude!


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Old Post Jul-18-2004 15:02  Australia
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Dana-O-
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Registered: Jul 2004
Location: Tel-Aviv

thankies
:P


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Old Post Jul-18-2004 15:05  Israel
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Massive84
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Registered: Jul 2003
Location: Sequence Realm

mint start, bass sounds nice..kick also.

clap sounds a bit loud not to much 2-4 less volume i say.

the acid stab could be morhped in to an acidline would be cooler..

nice pads on the background in the intro.

nice melody in the break, but it could use some nice pads , the ones are playing are to thin..

melody sounds nice, but it's very muddy..

smooth out the snare roll. + its a bit to loud i think.

i like the additional riff on top of the lead..really nice.

don't see anything new added, so i don't think you should extend the track to a second climax.

overall a nice solid production, it needs just better edits and better mix, this has potential just need work.

Dana hmm, girl? if yes , cool to see girls making this kinda uplifting music .


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Old Post Jul-18-2004 15:19  Netherlands
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Dana-O-
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Location: Tel-Aviv

thanks , and yes im a girl


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jessicah
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Registered: Dec 2003
Location: Dallas, USA

yay, awesome to see a girl posting music.

I don't think it's a bad tune, just what everyone else says, could use a bit of an original punch. You obviously can throw a song together, just keep plodding.


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Old Post Jul-19-2004 03:28  United States
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davidemonin
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Registered: Jun 2004
Location: Salt Lake City, USA

Nice driving tune. Sent you a PM.


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Old Post Jul-19-2004 05:48  United States
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Mario432
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Registered: Jun 2004
Location: Colorado, Colorado

hey,
First off nice track!!
I guess I would only say make that first synth after the break have less delay, and make it sound a bit more atmospheric if you know what I mean. It comes in kind of sudden and harsh. It sounds like its trying to hard,, lighten it up a bit... I think I would play with it more too, as in introduce it in later maybe. Anyways just little gripes about a rad track though!

g2g bed

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MK-S
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Registered: Oct 2002
Location: Birmingham, UK.

I'd say the main thing to change would be the lead. To me it sounds a bit dry and in the background, the track would have more power if you brought it forward. Otherwise very nice! A bit standard yes, but technically very sound.

And yeah, I think you're like the first female trance producer Nice one.

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Synergie
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Registered: Apr 2004
Location: Latvia, Riga

Clap is too loud! I like percusions.
Some sounds needs more FX like reverb...
I like your track till clap kicks in.

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Stino
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Registered: Jul 2004
Location: Bergen op Zoom

intro to the break is WICKED, with that very strange FX sample, wikkewikkewoh it sounds like that . I dont like that sine sound in the break, but i like the saw synth that comes up next, very atmospheric. Bassline owns, nuf said about bassline . Climax is OK, melody isnt really good, but i like that small FX so much so i keep listening . I like the 2nd melo line. Build off is ok

- V.Vision


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