Hey guys! It's me once again.

I need some more feedback on one of our potential singles for release. There'll be vocals in the final production. They won't be too heavy though. This version is only 3:38. The final will be about 5-6 min. All honest opinions welcomed. Thanks in advance.

It's encoded in 192kbs and about 5MB in size
http://rodari.lunarpages.com/~ahsfo...een_so_long.mp3


Some more of our songs are available here:
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.as...s=169948&T=7875

Last edited by zef on Aug-09-2004 at 02:54

cool sounds in the begin, very laxing.

bass is very subby, it's very busy , but nice stereo mix.

ah man, that saw lead screwed it, this deserves more a square or sine lead.

say no to saw!

and a clearer clap would be better also.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

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Originally posted by Massive84 cool sounds in the begin, very laxing. bass is very subby, it's very busy , but nice stereo mix. ah man, that saw lead screwed it, this deserves more a square or sine lead. say no to saw! and a clearer clap would be better also.

Yeah, I was planning to change the lead. One of my group members didn't like it all that much either. I'll tweak my synthesizer for a different type of sound and post the updated version when it's ready. Thanks for the feedback.

Yea i really like it just after halfway through the whole thing seems really cluttered - thought i betta just say wat i heard :P

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wheres this getting released?

mike

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