one of the first things i noticed when i listend to your track was that the percussion was real cool. I also really like the bass. It reminds me of the bass in Dave Gahan - Dirty sticky floors (Junkie XL remix).

However, I think the main thing you need to work on is the EQing and mastering of the track. The hats seemed filtered or something as there is no high end coming from them. Also, by listening to this track, it sounded quite amateurish which is not necessarily bad (we all start off as amateurs) but i still enjoyed this track due to the elements i explained above.

Hope as your producing keeps improving you'll start pumping out some killer tunes

Thanks

This track is my first venture into non breakbeat style, most of my stuff is Drum and Bass or Ambient breakbeat, i thought it was about time that I tried a trance track

Not 'toooo' bad for a first attempt

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hi

that crash is very loud

with EQ you can make the kick more punchier.
leadsynth is a bit on the low volume side, lead chords are easy, but work well.
pads are nice but seem to loud i think.

The main problem in this tune, is that the bass and kick don't have alot of punch, if you fix that, make them more clear, your tune will be much better

good luck (y).

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