ok hi! 
well i learned not to start with a crash if your starting with a pad.
some cool fx sounds on the beginning, i would lower the cut off filter of the bass string like the pad it self, and reverb it more for an overwhelming feel.
kick is ok, just needs more low, bass needs a change here imo, sounds so square.
clap with delay is cool imo, gives good drive, hihat sounds a bit lofi, treble it a bit more.
melody in the is old skool indeed, i like the chord progression here, have to get used on that synth though, no biggie.
break is cool with those sweeping strings, i digg that.
main melody is a bit to loud and try to introduce it a bit with the filter would work better i think.
second lead is also to loud.
just a few mixing issues here imo and the bass , i would make it a heavy deep saw but then thats taste.
good luck mate 
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