Hi there everyone!

Well after a week in Poland I just couldn’t wait to get back home and finish this tune I started. So I worked on it for a few more hours and finished it

The overall time that took me to make it was like 3 weeks and im pretty happy with the result, tough I think there are still some room for improvement so comment will be appreciated.

There is also a pretty cool melodic part at the beginning so don’t just skip that part cus I worked hard on that

Thanks in advance!
//Roman


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Roman Cherno - Serathi

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this sounds very cool . i think the intro is a bit too long, but it is very very nice. lead that starts about half way is cool, kick is a bit quiet in my opinion compared to everything else. bass is qutie cool. cool effects. great job man

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Thanks for giving it a listen mike!
Means a lot when it comes from you, really love your works and production style.

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ya i agree about the intro being too long hehe
i think percs need to be a touch louder, kick also louder, bass is very loud, i like...
melody is kewl, very theatrical in the beginning hehe, then very trancy in the middle,
i think u should call this an intro mix, that way u could leave the intro that long, but maybe make it a little more interesting like add more fx and stuff,
anyways, really gr8 work, i like it
tnx for sharing
keep it up
peace out

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nice intro great strings, adagio for strings little brother very sad and moody in the good way. Good buildups and quality. 05:05 starting synth is not for me , everything else is top notch.

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Thanks for giving it a listen guys!

Ill try making the intro more interesting by adding some more effects and stuff, thanks for pointing that out.

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cool start, those sweeping strings till 1.01 remind me on the game homeworld for some reason, if you played it you know the music

pads are nice.

drums are coming up

the kick has some weird tik sound, don't like such kicks.

intro is very long indeed, try to add like every 32 bar some new layer or something.

didn't really hear an actuall rest point.

melody seems cool, but i think it suits more an intro than a hook, but thats just me.

I think the tune is ok nice sounds overall, it just need some new arrangments, maybe stronger break, and a better intro.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

Hey dude, really nice to hear some more of your work. The production quality on this one sounds much better than your last, the synth on the main melody sounds great, really full and well effected. Great use of stereo throughout!
I really wanted this tune to evolve a little bit more; there was a long intro and awesome release when the melody comes in, but after that I think it needs to end up somewhere further along. Great work though!

Massive84 : just in case you didn't already know, adagio for strings was the music for homeworld. (ignore this if you already knew and were just being cheeky )

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Thanks for giving it a listen pho mo & Massive84.

I guess this time I did not as good as with my last tune, but that only means I'm gonna try way harder next time.

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Last edited by DJ-Kreing^^ on Aug-14-2004 at 10:40

this is a quality trance tune i must say, but i agree the kick seems to get quieter towards the thicker parts of the track until a point where you almost cant hear it. i love the kick tho, it just needs to be a bit louder

otherwise a nice refreshing trance track! keep up the good work.

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