This sounds good, guys, though there are a few things I didn't particularly like. I'm not sure whether it's an oboe in the first breakdown or not, but it could do with sounding more authentic and less like something you'd get out of a cheap keyboard! Also, while it's great that you sampled the vocals, they seem to cause something of a confused chord progression (ask me if you don't have a clue what I'm on about). I guess that can't be helped.
My final gripe is that the period of silence starting around 4m07s is a bit lengthy. Apart from that (!), good work! 
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