ok

fix the kick, needs to pound a bit more.

0.29 i hope thats not the bass? and that acid that comes up is really cool.

the synth is to loud in the mix, same with the pad.

break now, more attack and release on the pads pls, they sound to fast now .

kicks in back, cool drive now with that lead, clap is weak though makes the tune lack energy imo, the lead seems familiar.

second break, well you added a breakbeat, but for me thats not really 2nd climax worthy, try to add an counter lead on it?

fix the mixing and get a better clap imo and kick, and a deeper bass(but that bass thing is taste).

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

Massive84 always gets all technical (which is a good thing, keep it up bro) but i'm just going to be emotional and say I really like this tune. Been listening to it 4 or 5 times, and it's very good! I like the swelling pads, they work really well, and the distorted filter sweepy synth in the background. But all of this is just an excellent foundation for a cool melody.

Overall, it's a good solid tune that manages to stay focussed and driving throughout. Nice one!

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