hi ive been working on this new track if you have any critacisms constructive or not it will be aprreciated just wanted to know what you think , still needs another minitue or so before finish , should i carry on working or scrap it? i tried keeping it as simple as i can for that comercial / cheese sound . thanks

Dooh Dah .Mp3 (right click save as and then play the stream.m3u)

DETAILS, that's all I got to say. Ad in more details (rifs, FX, structures) and it'll probably grow a "good cheese"-tune

Btw, that streaming is annoying. It doesn't work properly.

Add some random "And Ill Always Love Your Smile" Type female vocals and Ill see you in the charts soon!

Nah, im not a fan of cheese. But still a very good efoort I must say I wouldnt hate this if it got into the charts. I could tolarate it.. which means its must be good!..lol

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